My dear, if once I could but hold your hand...
And lead you gently, by the rhythmic sea
And 'neath the solitary moon, like love birds, we
Shall walk upon these grains of golden sand
The moon smiles down upon us, ever beaming
Your tender heart beats in perfect accord
Those waves, they break the silence like a gallants sword
Then they caress the shore, like love-beams streaming
I sing to you a ballad, just for old times sake
Of lovers on a summers starry night
So innocent are words as beautiful as this
They drift into my mind, as it awakes
Amidst the sands of time, two lovers reunite
Our souls are sealed as one with but a single kiss.
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Simple and romantic. Well done.
exquisite. it even contains a line similar to one that i have written but haven't posted yet.
'Our souls are sealed as one with but a single kiss'
A sonnet. Tricky little tinkers, sonnets.
A minor point - but as someone studying literature... you should keep an eye on your apostrophes...
Nice poem.
Apostrophies or no it holds the rhythem of the sea like a mantre, quite beautifl
apostrophes to one side ('cos as we know, having been expelled from school, my punctuallity is perfect but my punctuation ain't)this is my second bite at this particular poem (sonnet is it? blimey) and it is, to my mind, staggeringly good.
more
more
more.
*smiles* its beautiful, gurl.
u write pretty amazing!
Hey Nicole...that is a beautiful poem....and we all yearn ...to have a hand to hold.....
Just in case you don't look back whats your magazine about?
Ahhh..this takes me back to all the romantic poetry we had back in school then...
it has such charm, kinda takes you to another time..another world!
Lovely :)
Sigh!
nice one...!(btw, i'm finally back for good)
A- Thanks
CJ-> Yup, a sonnet indeed!
Roger-> Will tkae note of that.
Sue-> The magazine that we brought out during the festival was like a college rag which we are very proud of. Its basically a funky funny, out of the box work of art with spoofs, contests, articles, hot celeb interviews etc..
elixir, Rusty - Thanx a lot.
Pins - Go back to writing/reading romantic poetry.
Shubho- welcome back.
Really exotic romantica!!
Hey, this one really opened up some long forgotten wounds once again.
As always,excellent stuff!!
Sounds like fun
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