It was supposed to be
the dreamiest Valentines Day ever.
And then I opened the door and saw.
A sight to haunt me forever
Upon the doormat, lay
An unidentified creature
Palpitating fiercely
Under some kind of seizure
Its eyes, popping out
Like a ping-pong ball machine
And its heart was where
its stomach should have been.
(Indeed it’s plain to see
He was blown away by me!)
the dreamiest Valentines Day ever.
And then I opened the door and saw.
A sight to haunt me forever
Upon the doormat, lay
An unidentified creature
Palpitating fiercely
Under some kind of seizure
Its eyes, popping out
Like a ping-pong ball machine
And its heart was where
its stomach should have been.
(Indeed it’s plain to see
He was blown away by me!)
8 comments:
as of course he should be!
as i agree, entirely.
Hi Nicole
What a sight to greet you when you open up the door.
Well, my new blog's up and running. You can hear/ download some of my new CD too. Click on the whizzy thing at the side.
Hope you're well. Very pleased to see you're still writing poems.
XXX
great! sorry for the late reply, things have been CRAYYYZEEE! I'm in the US, and Central America now.
How's thing with you Nicole?
:)
My valentine is lying on the couch whatching football so you have my deepest sympathy
You have nice poetry on this site. I note there's been not update since last February. I hope you are still writing! I'm going to add your blog to my RSS reader!
Where are the words, Nicole? I'm waiting ! :))
Nicola,
you haven't been writing. Its more than a year since your last post. Shocking!! Write Child!!
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