We knew that something was amiss
When bro' refused her "special" kiss
And asked instead for G I Joe
For having got a brilliant score
So mum was glum for half the day
Then sprightly she sprang up to say,
"Money can buy that and this,
There's nothing like a mother's kiss"
Beofore her son could even speak
She grabbed his shoulders, kissed his cheek
And with a most triumphant air
Sat back proudly on her chair
Till brother smirked and in a flash
Said....thanks, now could I have some cash!"
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nice one. nice and cosy. iliked it.
and whats "I'm still baffled as to what makes you tick!"
kindly explain!!
Hehe nice one. One of those few poetrys i liked!
I like this too.
I wonder, Shubhodeep, if Nicole meant that your poems are quite deep - in a good way of course.
Lovely fun poem
Thanks so much for the birthday wishes :)
I like the rhythm of this poem. The ending made me laugh out loud. Literally :)
Delightfully frothy,
Nice change of gear...
But why do I keep seeing a deeper & darker subtext to it, that of the increasing materialism which infects the young & old alike?
Perhaps I am being too cynical.Must get myself checked soon
;)
Now this was precious. Made me smile. Kisses from mommy are priceless ha.
It is so true--sad that kids do not always know it.
sahi blog....
been here for da first time.
keep going.
abhishek.
Shubho-> I meant that your poetry is an intensely personal experience - different somehow and yes, perhaps quite deep.
A Chrysanthemum..-> Ah, so this was one of those POEMS that you liked? :)
Roger-> merci monsieur (since you've been to Paris, lately!)
Sue-> thanks
Cantellya-> I can tell ya one thing for sure - theres nothing like a mothers kiss! (hahaha)
Sameer, Pecos -> Nah! I'd have gone for the mommys kiss any time. Brothers - different sort of species though! ;)
Shyloh-> Absolutely
Abhishek-> Ekdum Sahi, ha?
hee hee
that says it all i guess
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